tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5435629330016169213.post5967463050101113645..comments2024-01-05T14:29:04.090+05:30Comments on An Open Source Mind: तेरी हर अच्छी आदत को मैं खराब कर दूंगा ...RavShttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17252036293842242139noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5435629330016169213.post-1505311320110746672011-12-27T21:24:21.449+05:302011-12-27T21:24:21.449+05:30Hey Thanks PK, yes it was written with a lot of se...Hey Thanks PK, yes it was written with a lot of sentiments but I still it could have been quite better. Just posted it in a haste :)RavShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17252036293842242139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5435629330016169213.post-28836600049979513212011-12-09T07:52:40.081+05:302011-12-09T07:52:40.081+05:30PS: When I read the very first line..I thought its...PS: When I read the very first line..I thought its about Counter Strike :D #tooMuchOfCSpath3ticblogg3rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00463546598451292428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5435629330016169213.post-66249858890028990602011-12-09T07:50:11.066+05:302011-12-09T07:50:11.066+05:30definitely a great one..thats called pouring your ...definitely a great one..thats called pouring your heart out on paper..well done!path3ticblogg3rhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00463546598451292428noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5435629330016169213.post-42668121579028048452011-12-09T01:45:16.892+05:302011-12-09T01:45:16.892+05:30Thanks a lot mate. It's really encouraging to ...Thanks a lot mate. It's really encouraging to get authentic feedback from someone like you.<br /><br />Well, I have tried writing poems before too. In fact, I have a few poems half written.<br /><br />Usually lines keep coming in mind, but I don't get the time to elaborate on them :)RavShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17252036293842242139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5435629330016169213.post-35884448567327792692011-12-08T23:00:03.822+05:302011-12-08T23:00:03.822+05:30good..infact great first few lines are excellent.....good..infact great first few lines are excellent...no one can say its ur first poem.......Bright Shade Of Darknesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13799727557802101227noreply@blogger.com